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[Poofish in Love]

I grinned at the ending.

I was actually more amused by this than I expected I'd be.

If I were you, with your next submission I'd try to spruce up your preloader page a bit--it doesn't convey that the artwork gets better, so it may lead people to discount it without giving it a chance.

CaffeineClown responds:

I had alot of ideas for the preloader page as I'm aware the initial sight is what will persuade people to press 'play' - but after one too many hours of watching useless tutorials on YouTube I just figured I'd make it a mission for next time... glad it was enjoyable! The whole "Its funnier than I thought it was going to be" thing was kinda what I was going for haha!

[The Menga]

A few things...

First, only because it was driving me up the wall, always try to be careful with pronunciation. It's pronounced like "mahnga" not with an "ang" like in boomerang. That can quickly turn off a watcher who knows the language, same with the katakana mistake (you used hiragana "mo" instead of katakana). I know I'm nitpicking though.

In terms of the actual flash, you might want to speed it up a little bit. Some parts felt slow and the humor wasn't there enough of the time to keep the viewer interested. Think of natural speech and how short the pauses usually are in conversation. Also, be careful with music choice sometimes. It's nice to have some background music, but if it sounds too stereotypical and you hear it for too long, it begins to drone a bit and become unlikeable.

tl;dr
Careful of pronunciation, and try to speed up the pacing. I look forward to your next submission.

Markanime responds:

thanks you for your review!
I see that I have several mistakes, for example if you read the katakanas the hospital Daiunow is typed Akitemato, because this animation was done in spanish first.
anyway I'll try to solve these kind of mistakes on my next submission